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ABOUT CITATION
You must use the Harvard referencing system.
One of the purposes of referencing is to enable others to find the information that you have used in your assignment. Also, it is important to acknowledge the work of others if you have referred to it in your assignments; if you do not, you will be accused of plagiarism.
To avoid plagiarism, you must cite and reference all the sources of information that you have used in your assignment.
You can find a guide in the library or in here:

❖ For more information, please visit the Manchester Metropolitan University (MMU) website athttp://libguides.mmu.ac.uk/c.php?g=281251&p=1873441

• ❖   MMU has a standard version of the Harvard referencing style called MMU Harvard.

  Please visit http://libguides.mmu.ac.uk/c.php?g=281251&p=1873940 You can download the full MMU Harvard Referencing Guide as a PDF.

• ❖  On the other hand, the MMU Harvard Referencing is uploaded to YouTube.

  Please visit

  https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL9sZ_AmkyAXiUmy3Z5Huefezq8nG UUJRm

  VISUAL COMMUNICATION

• ●  The essay should be well edited, using one readable font.

• ●  Be typed or word-processed on standard A4 (297mm x 210mm) size paper;

• ●  Have all the pages, including references, bibliography, appendices and diagrams, numbered consecutively.

  
  

  *edit dengan harvard MMU referencing

  *menambahkan satu paragraf tentang perbandingan thrift shops Jakarta dan Luar negarei (contoh eropa)

  *mentranslate hasil excel survey ke inggris

  
  

  ini comment guru saya:

  First off, you did a good job with defining what fast fashion is and providing sources. This is something that you can do with sentences that make statements as well.
  For instance, the very first sentence is a claim and this is why it should be supported by evidence.
  Another thing is that the graphs that you include in the essay should be placed in the appendix (e.g., appendix 3), along with the primary research.
  Moreover, the survey should be more clear and translated in English, otherwise we will not be able to read it.
  
  
  This week we have our last class for this term and I will be able to answer any questions or concerns you might have.
  Saya akan memberikan paper saya setelah di accept oleh worker terima kasih